[萤火原创]My thoughts of the Film"The Diaries of  Princess" [复制链接]

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But in my opinion, "The film showed the way a young girl to become mature, considerate, conscientious, and even selfless." is just a part of the film. And I just generalize  the main characters the young lady has when she becomes the princess. 8}_M1w6v  
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By the way, there is one thing that puzzles me: if I want to write a summary of a film, which tense I should use is better?

Not all the girls eager to be a princess... NG\g_^.M
 
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Someone who want to just 'cause she haven't undergo that... 2b89th  
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If u ever been a princess in real... Maybe u'll have another thingking... 5N /NUs   
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All the things have two faces

I see~So I write "perhaps" ~ I know that not all the girls have that dream, but those are just in a majority.

我ps一句，如果考试尽量不要用太多的长句，就算你写得再妙，也会遭殃的

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This is just a writing exercise. And an exercise which I get in touch with English again. I should go on improving it. .
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I hope all of you will give me more good ideas. Thanks a lot. 

I think you'd better use some good sentence pattern and famous saying. In fact,I don't  adapt to read Eglish articles of  university.With I'm coming into colleage ,I will learn to write colleage aticles by you.How I hope you  would like to become my Eglish teacher.

well……most of tne english teachers in our colleage aren't expectable...perhaps it's the english class that i should say rubish...i didn't aquire anything during my colleage english classes.

引用第16楼dakusei于2007-07-05 11:32发表的  : FB n . 4  
well……most of tne english teachers in our colleage aren't expectable...perhaps it's the english class that i should say rubish...i didn't aquire anything during my colleage english classes.

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引用第15楼凯罗尔于2007-07-05 10:35发表的 : 9`5qVM1O{  
I think you'd better use some good sentence pattern and famous saying. In fact,I don't  adapt to read Eglish articles of  university.With I'm coming into colleage ,I will learn to write colleage aticles by you.How I hope you  would like to become my Eglish teacher.

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I'm so proud that you ask me to be your English teacher. WxS$yUu  
But I would rather be your English friends than be your teacher. as my English now is just soso. I hope we can be looking up together if you want.

引用第16楼dakusei于2007-07-05 11:32发表的  : 8?&!@3n  
well……most of tne english teachers in our colleage aren't expectable...perhaps it's the english class that i should say rubish...i didn't aquire anything during my colleage english classes.

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My teacher Ann is excellent.